Today we looked at blogs. They were all great. I can't wait to start blogging!!!! The End.
Wednesday 2 September 2015
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The writing is too short and lacks information. There are no details.
ReplyDeleteThe picture (visual) doesn't explain anything, or connect to the idea.
Word choice is poor, doesn't paint a picture in my mind.
Punctuation - only one exclamation mark. Your audience won't understand, because they don't know my personality and humor.
Act professional - visual, word choice, font choice, punctuation.